Discipline? Forget About It.

Not long ago, for my business course, I had to do some market research for ‘competitive’ projects; books or other media that were somewhat like mine but not so much. Acknowledging there’s anything out there remotely similar is difficult; whoever wants to admit that their stories aren’t actually unique? One’s first instinct, often, is to point out differences; no, that’s not at all like what I did. My characters are like this. Etc.

While browsing through time travel fiction on Amazon, though, I encountered a novel called Discipline, by Paco Ahlgren I’ll admit I clicked through, at first, based on its cover; it really is a good-looking book, with a well designed (if rather vague, now that I think about it) cover. Its description mentioned quantum mechanics, time travel, and Buddhism, and I was all kinds of like “Sold.” It also mentioned chess, which is up there with golf in terms of activities I just don’t get, but I figured, hey, I’ll give it a go anyway.

The novel follows Jasper Cole as he learns about some unique abilities he has. It’s approximately like The Matrix, story-wise, except without the Matrix thing itself, which I liked; Ahlgren sets everything pretty much here and now, and its ‘fantasy’ elements can be explained away to quantum physics/mechanics. Uncertainty principles and the like.

This is an idea I’ve been fascinated with; the question of reality, and what it means. There are places where philosophy and quantum physics supercollide, and this novel is sort of about them.

It’s not perfect. There are some long sections of pretty much completely expository dialogue, where one character explains something to another pretty much for the sake of the reader. Cole, too, comes off like a whiny little bitch sometimes because his mentors feel, at moments, that he is not yet ready for new concepts, which would be fine except one gets the impression Ahlgren is simply holding his cards just yet, which makes Cole reader-proxy. It clunks down at times, and it neither starts nor ends well; I get the sense it’s because it’s the first in a planned series, but still it could have satisfied more.

At the same time I ordered Alhgren’s, I ordered Caprice Crane’s new book, Forget About It. The premise is rather awesome; a girl with a life she doesn’t much like gets into an accident, so she fakes amnesia for a ‘do-over.’ I was a huge fan of Crane’s first novel, Stupid and Contagious, with which this new one shared its wit and charm.

It isn’t quite without its problems, either; for a do-over, its protagonist, Jordan, starts down pretty much the same path she’d led before. She’s a bit of a pushover (which is part of the premise), but she also seems like she tries her best to avoid every confrontation she could have with people. Which is true to life, certainly, but novels aren’t life.

Overall, I enjoyed it for what it was; light and fun, with some romance and plenty of humor.

So what was the last good book you read? I’m looking for suggestions for my next read.

And by the way, A couple new photos (again of fountains) over at Imagery.

0 thoughts on “Discipline? Forget About It.

  1. ALMA

    I have no good book suggestions. All I’ve read lately are tedious, horrifyingly dull books for my Colorado History class and Praxis exam prep books. I doubt I’ll be reading much more for fun anytime soon. This makes Alma sad.

  2. GOTHAMGIRL

    It’s not fiction, mind you, but the last good book I read was called the Science of Happiness. It’s put together quite well and I have learned things I never new like bad moods impend your intelligence, having a blood clot on the right side of your brain will make you perpetually cheerfull but unable to comprehend reality, and their are elevine smiles but only one is genuine and this smile will make you happier if you can train your body to do it.

    Fiction wise I recomend Memoirs of a Geisha. Your a smart man. I don’t think I have to explain this one. Look it up and judge for your self.

    Movie wise I recomend Shoot ‘Em Up. Do you remember when I wrote the gay cowboy blog about differen’t things that would make me have wanted to see Broke Back Mountain? One of them was high quaility gun action, as if Jakie Chan was a gun. It has that and instead of the cliche cigarette smoking hero our hero Clive Owen constantly eats carrots.

  3. LISASURA

    I’m not reading fiction right now, but I am reading.

    It’s a memoir called “Eat, Pray, Love” which so far has made me laugh out loud and cry. I love how Elizabeth Gilbert wrote this book, completely honest and raw, through her travels to Italy, India, and Indonesia. So far, I’m in awe of what this woman did for herself. It’s pretty incredible, and I’m so very impressed with her spiritual/self journey.

    A book that I was given for Christmas, but just picked up a few evenings ago.


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